Thursday, November 10, 2011

Comments for Higschoolers

  Wow! That is very fascinating on those two topics. The topic on witch craft seems very understandable tough to the fact of Reformation and Salem. I hope to see you writing about the project on your blog some more. 

 King Henry VIII is a excellent topic to find information of his life. The topic is a good start for your project. Good luck on finding your information.

Friday, November 4, 2011


I liked your story a lot it was very interesting on how Gary ran away to find his father and left his family. Also I was happy because they were reunited. What inspired you to make this story?

Thursday, November 3, 2011

The Cannibal in Pickle-Bread Town

    One night in Los Angeles, California in Pickle-Bread Town, a girl named Melissa and her boyfriend named Joey are hanging out with their couple friends named Shayla and Robert at the back of an alley. So the four of the friends were talking about their relationship and their future. Until somebody mysteriously in the shadows grabbed Melissa. She 1screamed for Joey, but it was too late. Joey cried and shrieked that night. At that very moment he ran after the man. Robert and Shayla screamed for Joey to come back, but there was no sign of footsteps running. So the two of them didn’t know what to do, so they ran after him. Five minutes later while running they saw Joey on the ground, bleeding by tape wire on the ground wrapped around his legs.Shayla said  “Go help him”. “ No , you get him”, responded Robert. So Shayla went over to help him because Robert was to scared to help. While over there Shayla heard leaves rattling, “Robert come over here and help, I hear a noise”, said Shayla. “ Alright”, answered Robert. When the two grabbed Joey it was too late he was already dead. Shayla and Robert hid behind the bushes.That’s when a man dragged Joey’s body off into the woods; the two followed the hideous man.

This is my story for an assignment in Mr C's Class. I have not finished the story but, please comment for me to right more. Also this is the first paragraph in my story the second paragraph is not finished.


Monday, October 17, 2011

Why I Write

When I write I feel like my whole life is just in one picture. 
I helps me remember what happens in my life or what I plan to do. 
I write because it expresses my feelings when I'm happy,sad,or not in the mood.
I go to my happy place by writing.
I write to feel free because I have right to write.  
So that is the reason Why I Write. 

Thursday, October 13, 2011

Setting Of A Story

Running through the woods I hear a scream. I see a ghostly image of death.The house is dark and terrifying inside, a dreadful smell comes from the basement. I hear the screeches from the stairs right through my head to feet.

Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Science Lesson

What I am doing in Science is teaching my classmates Wegener. Where I have found my resources and information is at The activity that I am having the class do is a paper plate with cuttings of Pangaea. Also in the activity with the hole puncher,I punched out hole on top of the continents. I grabbed the string and put pieces of string into the continents. After that I tied the string to the plate and when i pull the strings the continents will go together like Pangaea. The vocabulary that I am using is Pangaea.

Tuesday, September 13, 2011

What is Copyright?

I chose Commons Attribution-Non Commercial-Share Alike 3.0 Unported License, because if it was commercial they might have gotten money for it and would not even give me credit for what I wrote. Also I chose it because if they borrowed it they would maybe not even share it to others and keep it all to themselves.